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  1. Posted: May 22, 2017In: Drama

    Bruce Ismay was ontop of the world until he took one single step off the doomed RMS Titanic and fought the rest of his life to save its memory and his legacy

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 2:59 pm

    This is simply a confusing logline. I would start from scratch on this one.

    This is simply a confusing logline.

    I would start from scratch on this one.

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2017In: Adventure

    When a writer stuck in a survival cycle finds his car’s tank remains full all the time, he sets on a journey around the world, searching for persons he can help in the most impactful way with this newfound gift.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 11:23 am

    You should tell us what the newfound gift is, (Unless the gift is simply the tank remaining full all the time. if that's the case he should just become an Uber driver)

    You should tell us what the newfound gift is, (Unless the gift is simply the tank remaining full all the time. if that’s the case he should just become an Uber driver)

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2017In: Drama

    Helped by her friends, a shy teenager finds success in an underground art world, but is left struggling when treatment for her mental illness strips her of both her best friend and her creativity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 11:19 am

    You should give the lead character a pro-active goal" ---------------------------------------------- "When her treatment for mental illness strips her of her creativity, a shy artist searches for a holistic cure, against the recommendation of her doctor and the adamant disapproval of her best friendRead more

    You should give the lead character a pro-active goal”
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    “When her treatment for mental illness strips her of her creativity, a shy artist searches for a holistic cure, against the recommendation of her doctor and the adamant disapproval of her best friend .”

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