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  1. Posted: May 20, 2017In: Comedy

    When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 20, 2017 at 1:07 pm

    Could there be a Goth detective? I assume the police have certain standards when it comes to how detectives dress and would probably frown at a detective with piercings and make-up.

    Could there be a Goth detective? I assume the police have certain standards when it comes to how detectives dress and would probably frown at a detective with piercings and make-up.

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2017In: SciFi

    Planet Earth is under alien occupation by the Reptilian Armada and their High Commander Rigel, is in search of his future Queen Sasha. Bound by a prophecy; Rigel and Sasha will marry bringing forth a child blending the bloodlines and forming an alliance between both their planets.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 20, 2017 at 8:45 am

    If 'Sasha' is human, ?the story (And logline) should be written from her perspective, and she should be given a goal.

    If ‘Sasha’ is human, ?the story (And logline) should be written from her perspective, and she should be given a goal.

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2017In: Crime

    An on the edge of your seat drama about an NYPD detective who falls in love with a woman; who?s brother is the head of a drug cartel and the detective?s partner gone bad, determined to end their romance.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on May 20, 2017 at 8:38 am

    1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.Example: When he falls in love with= when he faRead more

    1:? In a logline word count matters. This makes creating loglines good writing practice because you learn to write with the least amount of words possible. You will find yourself doing the same thing in your scripts as well, once you get the hang of it.

    Example:
    When he falls in love with= when he falls for
    The head of a drug cartel = drug cartel kingpin
    A woman, who’s brother is = the sister of

    It’s just cutting a word here and a word there but after a while it becomes second nature.

    2: Also you should give the detective a pro-active goal

    “When he falls for the head of a drug cartel’s sister, a detective must…” (Then tell us what he must do)

    Hope that helped, good luck with this

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