1. Posted: May 20, 2017In:

    An on the edge of your seat drama about an NYPD detective who falls in love with a woman; who?s brother is the head of a drug cartel and the detective?s partner gone bad, determined to end their romance.

    Richiev Singularity

    What is the lead characters goal? That seems to be missing from the logline.

    What is the lead characters goal? That seems to be missing from the logline.

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2017In:

    A dark, sinister agent tears apart once inseparable brothers into fierce, hateful rivals as he plots to destroy the protagonist and his family for opposing his rule as a demi-god on ancient Earth.

    Richiev Singularity

    I was just going to ask 'Who's the lead character?' but dpg basically beat me too it.

    I was just going to ask ‘Who’s the lead character?’ but dpg basically beat me too it.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2017In:

    Pitted in a spiritual batle against their evil cyborg uncle and his dark, sinister master, two spiritually gifted twin seek solace as they fight to avenge thier mother’s murder and find fabled elemental orbs.

    Richiev Singularity

    I am not sure what a spiritual battle is... Do they hit people over the head with bibles. Do they have Angels at their command? Are they Ghosts?

    I am not sure what a spiritual battle is… Do they hit people over the head with bibles. Do they have Angels at their command? Are they Ghosts?

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