1. Posted: May 15, 2017In:

    Two recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.

    Richiev Singularity

    When I have to look the definition of a word up... Never a good sign.

    When I have to look the definition of a word up… Never a good sign.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2017In:

    A marine with PTSD struggles to find answers to his unsettling dreams and nightmares until he discovers his nightmares are repressed memories and that he is a sole survivor sent into the future to warn Earth. Title: ETSD.

    Richiev Singularity

    This seems more like a set up to a story. "When a marine with PTSD discovers his nightmares are really memories from the future, he must find a way to warn earth of the impending (Comet? War? Virus?) that will soon destroy the earth.

    This seems more like a set up to a story.

    “When a marine with PTSD discovers his nightmares are really memories from the future, he must find a way to warn earth of the impending (Comet? War? Virus?) that will soon destroy the earth.

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2017In:

    On returning to work from maternity leave, a journalist discovers her children?s carer is the daughter of a woman controversially convicted of murder in the last trial she covered.

    Richiev Singularity

    You can drop the part about returning to work after maternity leave. The story begins when she hires the new babysitter.

    You can drop the part about returning to work after maternity leave. The story begins when she hires the new babysitter.

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