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On the verge of a succession crisis, a good mermaid princess is banished from her kingdom to the human world for her forbidden love of humans; but when her two wicked sisters usurp their father’s throne and destroy each other in a power struggle to rule the kingdom alone, she must choose between humanity and saving her people from the tyranny of her sisters.
It is hard to tell what is the story and what is the back story. My guess would be, what sets the story in motion would be her sisters usurping her father. In that case here would be a logline attempt. ----------------------------------------------------- "When a content housewife discover her sisteRead more
It is hard to tell what is the story and what is the back story.
My guess would be, what sets the story in motion would be her sisters usurping her father. In that case here would be a logline attempt.
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“When a content housewife discover her sisters have usurped her father’s undersea throne, she must leave her loving family and return to her past life as a mermaid to restore her father to his rightful place.”
A struggling musician faces a heart-wrenching decision when he is presented with the greatest opportunity of his young career.
The heart-wrenching situation is your hook, the more heart-wrenching the stronger the hook... therefore it is not something you want to be vague about in the logline. Give us the details and as pointed out, tell us what the protagonist must do.When his mother dies on the verge of his breakout nationRead more
The heart-wrenching situation is your hook, the more heart-wrenching the stronger the hook… therefore it is not something you want to be vague about in the logline. Give us the details and as pointed out, tell us what the protagonist must do.
When his mother dies on the verge of his breakout national tour, a rebellious rocker is must take care of his father who has alzheimers.
When his daughter is diagnosed with leukemia a talented but struggling musician must join the corporate world to pay for the expensive treatment
Tell us specifically what is heart-wrenching about your story in order to draw in the reader and your logline will improve dramatically.
See lessFAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.
It would help if the vindictive teacher was the father of the love interest and thus his vendetta is personal.
It would help if the vindictive teacher was the father of the love interest and thus his vendetta is personal.
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