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  1. Posted: April 11, 2017In: Action

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England’s position in Afghanistan not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2017 at 2:53 pm

    If Sherlock is the lead character, the logline should be written from his point of view. -------------------------------------------- "When his father is appointed by MI5 to investigate a plan to undermine England, Sherlock Homes and his best friend Moriarty must deter his dads investigation all whiRead more

    If Sherlock is the lead character, the logline should be written from his point of view.
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    “When his father is appointed by MI5 to investigate a plan to undermine England, Sherlock Homes and his best friend Moriarty must deter his dads investigation all while sabotaging England’s plans for Afghanistan”?

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2017In: Fantasy

    Astrolia: When a man goes missing on an archaeological dig his brilliant but narrow-minded niece discovers his secret double life and her own connection to an ancient prophecy in a world she never knew existed.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2017 at 1:39 pm

    Another thing you could do to polish this logline: A logline should be written from one point of view, You begin from the uncles point of view then switch to the Nieces point of view.Here would be an example of beginning your logline from the point of view of the lead character ----- "When her uncleRead more

    Another thing you could do to polish this logline: A logline should be written from one point of view, You begin from the uncles point of view then switch to the Nieces point of view.

    Here would be an example of beginning your logline from the point of view of the lead character
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    “When her uncle goes missing while on a dig, a brilliant but narrow-minded archaeology student must…” (Then tell us what path this event sets into motion for the lead character)
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  3. Posted: April 10, 2017In: Fantasy

    Astrolia: When a man goes missing on an archaeological dig his brilliant but narrow-minded niece discovers his secret double life and her own connection to an ancient prophecy in a world she never knew existed.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 10, 2017 at 11:41 am

    "This is the set up, the story would be what she does when she finds out she is prophecy girl"

    “This is the set up, the story would be what she does when she finds out she is prophecy girl”

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