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Two gay couple face religious governmental charges for being gay in a third world country and their sentence is death by stoning, but both believe there is a way out.
That is the situation, what they will do about it is the story. A logline describes story not situation. "When two gay couples are sentenced to death by sharia law, they must.." (then tell us what they must do)
That is the situation, what they will do about it is the story. A logline describes story not situation.
“When two gay couples are sentenced to death by sharia law, they must..” (then tell us what they must do)
See lessA space explorer leads an expedition after believing to have discovered paradise which gradually descends into madness.
You have not given us a goal for the lead character, that is an important missing piece of your logline. ----------------------------------- "As he explores an idyllic planet which ?could serve as the new home for humanity, an intrepid explore must fight his way back to his spaceship when the supposRead more
You have not given us a goal for the lead character, that is an important missing piece of your logline.
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“As he explores an idyllic planet which ?could serve as the new home for humanity, an intrepid explore must fight his way back to his spaceship when the supposed Paradise turns deadly.”
A young police officer must prevent a bomb exploding aboard a city bus by keeping its speed above 50 mph.
I have to admit this one is a little trickier than I thought it would be. --------------------------------------- "When a madman arms a bomb to explode if the bus decelerates below 50 mph, a cocky police officer must find a way on the bus and disarm the device?all while coordinating the investigatioRead more
I have to admit this one is a little trickier than I thought it would be.
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“When a madman arms a bomb to explode if the bus decelerates below 50 mph, a cocky police officer must find a way on the bus and disarm the device?all while coordinating the investigation into the bombers identity.”
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