1. Posted: April 1, 2017In:

    In a nuclear post apocalyptic world, a group of human survivors receive a distress signal coming from a nuclear bomb shelter and they set out on a rescue mission, only to discover an unimaginable horror inside.

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    "When they discover an unimaginable horror inside a nuclear bomb shelter, a group of apocalypse survivors must..." (Then tell us what they must do)

    “When they discover an unimaginable horror inside a nuclear bomb shelter, a group of apocalypse survivors must…” (Then tell us what they must do)

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2017In:

    A dissatisfied 30-something-year-old woman risks her long-term relationship to figure out if she?s missing out on a more exciting and passionate love life.

    Richiev Singularity

    There was a movie in the 80's called "Nina takes a lover" about a dissatisfied housewife who... you know, takes a lover. So I believe there is room here for an interesting story.However you should give us a more compelling inciting incident to hook the readers of this logline.

    There was a movie in the 80’s called “Nina takes a lover” about a dissatisfied housewife who… you know, takes a lover. So I believe there is room here for an interesting story.

    However you should give us a more compelling inciting incident to hook the readers of this logline.

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2017In:

    In the final stages of war between three factions, an incredible warrior and huntsman is called upon birth to secure, protect and adapt a defenseless faction called Avagon whilst ensuring their victory and survival.

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    Just curious, but what is motivating the lead character? Is their a personal connection in saving Avagon? If so it should be added to the logline.

    Just curious, but what is motivating the lead character? Is their a personal connection in saving Avagon? If so it should be added to the logline.

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