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Faced with a massive financial battle, a down-on-his-luck man has to urgently pay for his son?s emergency operation. It is not until he stumbles upon his long lost friend and he returns a long forgotten favor that his tilted world suddenly becomes upright again and his life changes for the better.
?When his son suddenly needs an emergency operation, a cash strapped (Give us an occupation) devises a plan to cash in an old?favor from a rich former friend.??
?When his son suddenly needs an emergency operation, a cash strapped (Give us an occupation) devises a plan to cash in an old?favor from a rich former friend.?
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See lessA down-on-his-luck man is battling to find money to pay for his son’s emergency operation. It is not until he stumbles upon his long lost friend that his life changes for the better.
You have two inciting incidents When his son needs an emergency operation When he stumbles upon his long lost friend. I would stick with the inciting incident which sets his course of action. Here would be an example: (Your logline would be different of course) ----- "When his son suddenly needs anRead more
You have two inciting incidents
When his son needs an emergency operation
When he stumbles upon his long lost friend.
I would stick with the inciting incident which sets his course of action.
Here would be an example: (Your logline would be different of course)
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“When his son suddenly needs an emergency operation, a cash strapped (Give us an occupation) devises a plan to steal the money from a rich former friend.”
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See lessDesperation leads a 14-year-old teenage girl to engage in self-destructive activity out of desire to detach her consciousness from her reality but when death appears her only solace, her creator shows up to declares her value and saves her.
I would be a bit more specific about the 'desperation'Specifically what is it that makes her desperate?Has her mother begun dating the wrong guy. Is there a specific bully at school that crossed the line in a specific way? Did her boyfriend break up with her?Instead of telling us she is desperate, DRead more
I would be a bit more specific about the ‘desperation’
Specifically what is it that makes her desperate?
Has her mother begun dating the wrong guy.
Is there a specific bully at school that crossed the line in a specific way?
Did her boyfriend break up with her?
Instead of telling us she is desperate, Describe the event that caused her desperation.
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