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In an effort to track down his estranged girlfriend and reconnect with her, a recovering alcoholic embarks on a cross-country journey that turns out to be poignant discovery into his past.
I disagree. A logline should not contain spoilers... never give away the third act. Tell what sets the story in motion, what the lead character wants, tell us what is standing in the lead character's way... but never spoil how it ends. (And never tell us the 'big reveal' if there is one)
I disagree.
A logline should not contain spoilers… never give away the third act.
Tell what sets the story in motion, what the lead character wants, tell us what is standing in the lead character’s way… but never spoil how it ends. (And never tell us the ‘big reveal’ if there is one)
See lessAt the threshold of death, an obscure, nonconformist, bisexual writer settles down with a female student on the French Riviera to fight the last merciless battle for his life and global recognition.
Okay, I asked the question for a reason... and I thank you for the answer. The reason was, we know nothing about the writer at the beginning of the story. So having the story from the perspective of the student would actually give the audience their point of view. We would learn about the aging artiRead more
Okay, I asked the question for a reason… and I thank you for the answer.
The reason was, we know nothing about the writer at the beginning of the story. So having the story from the perspective of the student would actually give the audience their point of view. We would learn about the aging artist as the student does.
However, as for your second logline, I think it is better, however, you need to give us a ‘face’ to global recognition… such as being on the cover of ‘time magazine’ or winning a Pulitzer Prize. What does global recognition look like to the lead character? How do we know what success looks like? How do we know when the character succeeds? (Or fails)
See lessAt the threshold of death, an obscure, nonconformist, bisexual writer settles down with a female student on the French Riviera to fight the last merciless battle for his life and global recognition.
From who's point of view is this story told?
From who’s point of view is this story told?
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