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After receiving an email to partake in a heist experience, an intrepid engineering student and his friends must work out how to rob a casino; but when they discover the heist is real, they must find the creators and expose them before they’re caught.
When he discovers the 'heist experience' he signed up for is actually a real casino robbery, an engineering student and his friends must expose those behind the email before the FBI or the Mob catch up to them.
When he discovers the ‘heist experience’ he signed up for is actually a real casino robbery, an engineering student and his friends must expose those behind the email before the FBI or the Mob catch up to them.
See lessA young lawyer discovers through the diary of one of his ancestors that his family has served an ancient vampire for generations, so he must decide between succumbing to power and greed or doing the right thing and losing everything.
That's better. How about: When he discovers his family has served an ancient vampire for generations a young Lawyer must... (Then tell us what he must do)
That’s better. How about:
When he discovers his family has served an ancient vampire for generations a young Lawyer must… (Then tell us what he must do)
See lessA young lawyer discovers through the diary of one of his ancestors that his family has served an ancient vampire for generations, so he must decide between succumbing to power and greed or doing the right thing and losing everything.
I would avoid loglines that end with a choice. Because watching a 90 movie where the lead is like "Should I?" or "Shouldn't I?" Makes the lead seem indecisive. Besides 90 minutes of someone trying to make a decision isn't very compelling. Instead, I would have the lead be 'Trapped' The lead discoverRead more
I would avoid loglines that end with a choice. Because watching a 90 movie where the lead is like “Should I?” or “Shouldn’t I?” Makes the lead seem indecisive. Besides 90 minutes of someone trying to make a decision isn’t very compelling.
Instead, I would have the lead be ‘Trapped’
The lead discovers he is bound by a contract his ancestors made and the story would be him trying to figure a way out.
Dig your lead into a hole then start shoveling dirt on top of him.
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