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In a male-dominated town, a frustrated editor attends to self-help groups for men, not to seek help but to prepare himself against them.
This logline isn't very specific or personal. To improve the logline you should show how the death of the gay dancer (From the previous logline) personally affects the lead character. Also, you should put a face to the bad guy. ----- "When his best friend, a gay dancer, is killed by the town bully aRead more
This logline isn’t very specific or personal.
To improve the logline you should show how the death of the gay dancer (From the previous logline) personally affects the lead character.
Also, you should put a face to the bad guy.
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“When his best friend, a gay dancer, is killed by the town bully and his pack, a frustrated editor attends a men’s retreat in order to get close to those responsible and get his revenge.”
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Overall, I think this is a solid premise. Perhaps the ‘self-help group for men,’ could be one of those, rediscover your manhood conferences, where the men all camp in the woods for a week in order to get back to the ‘Caveman within’.
The lead character would then knock the bad guys off one by one.
See lessOr if this is a non-violent movie, He finds his ‘caveman within’ only to (Discover ‘this’ about himself)
After being hired to lead a failing breakfast TV show, a talented but undervalued producer is forced to use crazy tactics in order to improve its ratings.
If this logline example is for the movie "Morning Glory" then it's good... because that immediately sprang to mind.
If this logline example is for the movie “Morning Glory” then it’s good… because that immediately sprang to mind.
See lessInorder to Save and Marry his Indian Girlfriend who is getting arranged Married, An American Highschool teacher is being tricked by his Indian Student and Colleagues plans & Kidnaps his Girlfriend from her Strict Cultural Family
What is the relationship between the students and colleagues, and the girl he is in love with? In other words, what is their motivation for tricking the lead character?
What is the relationship between the students and colleagues, and the girl he is in love with? In other words, what is their motivation for tricking the lead character?
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