1. Posted: May 26, 2021In:

    When an Earth colony ship teacher discovers his government is hiding information and executing it’s citizens, he must find a way to hide from the governments watchful eyes and rebel; but when his friends are captured he must find a way to overthrow the government to save his friends and free his people.

    Richiev Singularity

    After an explosion causes their colony ship to take twice as long to get to their new home planet, a teacher must save two of her students when the elitist government decides to kill off undesirables so the deserving can survive."

    After an explosion causes their colony ship to take twice as long to get to their new home planet, a teacher must save two of her students when the elitist government decides to kill off undesirables so the deserving can survive.”

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  2. Posted: May 27, 2021In:

    A researcher stumbles upon a group of young children, who can communicate without being connected, but he’s shocked to discover that the children wish to eradicate their elders–and particularly the researcher.

    Richiev Singularity

    I agree with Odie, if you can say something with one or two words don't use more, A group of kids who can 'communicate telepathically'... gets rid of extra words.

    I agree with Odie, if you can say something with one or two words don’t use more,

    A group of kids who can ‘communicate telepathically’… gets rid of extra words.

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  3. Posted: May 27, 2021In:

    A researcher stumbles upon a group of young children, who can communicate without being connected, but he’s shocked to discover that the children wish to eradicate their elders–and particularly the researcher.

    Richiev Singularity

    The logline should not be about the lead being shocked, it should be about what he does about the situation.

    The logline should not be about the lead being shocked, it should be about what he does about the situation.

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