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When his daughter commits suicide after witnessing her ex-con boyfriend shot to death, a father-before-a-cop helps Internal Affairs investigators in a sting operation to nail the dirty cops responsible.
Since this hasn't been written yet, you should take out the suicide angle.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------"When his son is killed by the police, a former cop works with internal affairs to bring the dirty officers to justice."--------------------------Read more
Since this hasn’t been written yet, you should take out the suicide angle.
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“When his son is killed by the police, a former cop works with internal affairs to bring the dirty officers to justice.”
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Also, I am not sure he needs to be a former police officer. What if he is a current officer and his son ‘who is black’ is beaten to death by dirty officers. Now he is secretly working with internal affairs but if his fellow officers find out, he will become a pariah. Suddenly the stakes are much higher. These are his brothers but they will turn on him if he is caught.
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“When his son is beaten to death by the police, an African American cop works with internal affairs to bring the dirty officers to justice, but must maintain his secrecy from his fellow brother’s in blue or become a pariah.”
See lessWhen his daughter commits suicide after witnessing her ex-con boyfriend shot to death, a father-before-a-cop helps Internal Affairs investigators in a sting operation to nail the dirty cops responsible.
Just curious, but is this logline for a script already written, or are you fleshing out an idea by writing the logline first?
Just curious, but is this logline for a script already written, or are you fleshing out an idea by writing the logline first?
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It's hard to tell from your logline but Is the lead character's schizophrenia a 'big reveal? In other words, does he go about killing his wife and her lover, then the big reveal is, they never existed? And it all starts over again, the end?
It’s hard to tell from your logline but Is the lead character’s schizophrenia a ‘big reveal?
In other words, does he go about killing his wife and her lover, then the big reveal is, they never existed? And it all starts over again, the end?
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