1. Posted: June 2, 2015In:

    Joseph Smith escapes from heaven and comes back to earth and has to convince the world that he wasn’t lying in the first place and convert everyone to mormonism after a significant number of the church members leave .

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    Is Joseph Smith the lead character?

    Is Joseph Smith the lead character?

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  2. Posted: May 28, 2015In:

    A year after the end of a bitter war between mysterious creatures and the human race, a knight in outback Australia discovers a mysterious aboriginal boy, together they learn the grim reality that the war is far from over.

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    I am reading this logine trying to figure out the inciting incident. It seems that 'learning the war isn't over' is the inciting incident. The story would be about what the two of them must do about it.

    I am reading this logine trying to figure out the inciting incident.

    It seems that ‘learning the war isn’t over’ is the inciting incident. The story would be about what the two of them must do about it.

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  3. Posted: May 28, 2015In:

    An amnesiac who wakes up chained to a table in a mysterious room must uncover why sinister doctors are performing grisly operations on him.

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    If I awake chained to the table, my first thought isn't "Why are they doing this" my thought is "I must escape."

    If I awake chained to the table, my first thought isn’t “Why are they doing this” my thought is “I must escape.”

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