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When a disgraced former marine is confronted by his wounded daughter, he must protect her from his former clandestine employers who want to use him to kick start an old MKUltra programme
The problem with this logline is the term 'a distant father' Just because he is a father doesn't mean he can help. When his daughter is wounded a former marine must... When his daughter is wounded a computer genius must... What special skills does the father have? Why is he the one who can take downRead more
The problem with this logline is the term ‘a distant father’
Just because he is a father doesn’t mean he can help.
When his daughter is wounded a former marine must…
When his daughter is wounded a computer genius must…
What special skills does the father have? Why is he the one who can take down the program? Why him?
See lessAfter a hospital explosion claims the life of her recently-born infant, a suicidal police officer agrees to play a supernatural game where she's pitted against the terrorist who ruined her life.
Overall not bad 'Infant' implies 'recently born' so don't need to say it twice. Not sure what you mean by supernatural game, that's where the logline starts blurring a bit. With a few little changes this should be good.
Overall not bad
‘Infant’ implies ‘recently born’ so don’t need to say it twice.
Not sure what you mean by supernatural game, that’s where the logline starts blurring a bit.
With a few little changes this should be good.
See lessTitle of Story: ASAP Written by: Leon E. Connell Logline: "ASAP" is a drama film in which a college student who brings the awareness of suicide among teenagers to a whole other level. Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy Type: Can be a Mini-Series Script, Short Story, or film God Bless, Leon E. Connell
A logline usually consists of a lead character, an event that set's the story in motion, a goal and something standing in the way. If you can add irony into the logline it helps, this should be done in about 30 words. Example: "When his best friend commits suicide, a telephone phobic student createsRead more
A logline usually consists of a lead character, an event that set’s the story in motion, a goal and something standing in the way. If you can add irony into the logline it helps, this should be done in about 30 words.
Example:
“When his best friend commits suicide, a telephone phobic student creates his own suicide hotline but must fight his fears and the Dean who’s determined to terminate his unsanctioned enterprise.”
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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