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  1. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

    Richiev Singularity
    Replied to answer on April 2, 2021 at 12:34 am

    Have you seen the movie Angel Heart? Your story is very original, but there is this one little part in the conclusion of Angel Heart that might help you in 'how' to do a big reveal. I am not saying to copy or anything, I am just staying study the technique. (If you are like me you will figure the biRead more

    Have you seen the movie Angel Heart?

    Your story is very original, but there is this one little part in the conclusion of Angel Heart that might help you in ‘how’ to do a big reveal. I am not saying to copy or anything, I am just staying study the technique.

    (If you are like me you will figure the big reveal out before but they still did the ‘big reveal’ very well)

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

    Richiev Singularity
    Replied to answer on April 1, 2021 at 7:05 pm

    This of course is made more difficult because the fact they are the same person, sounds like a 'big reveal' which you would not want in the logline. So I like how Odie and yourself try to imply without telling.

    This of course is made more difficult because the fact they are the same person, sounds like a ‘big reveal’ which you would not want in the logline. So I like how Odie and yourself try to imply without telling.

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  3. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 1, 2021 at 12:28 am

    "A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to discover a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood's Messiah."

    “A schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to discover a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah.”

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