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To add some spice to mundane life a wedding photographer and his childhood friend set about organizing a show of local rock bands that were famous in the 1990s and make a documentary about them. Will the two friends manage to find their true calling in life when everything goes wrong?
In a movie a character should want or need something so bad that it seems like their whole world will end if they don't get it. "Adding some spice to their lives" does't seem that compelling a goal. Nor do you have an inciting incident. Why now? Why not last year or next year? What happened to makeRead more
In a movie a character should want or need something so bad that it seems like their whole world will end if they don’t get it.
“Adding some spice to their lives” does’t seem that compelling a goal.
Nor do you have an inciting incident. Why now? Why not last year or next year? What happened to make the characters act now?
Now your story may have both those elements but your logline will improve greatly if you add a compelling goal and an inciting incident.
See lessTo add some spice to mundane life a wedding photographer and his childhood friend set about organizing a show of local rock bands that were famous in the 1990s and make a documentary about them. Will the two friends manage to find their true calling in life when everything goes wrong?
In a movie a character should want or need something so bad that it seems like their whole world will end if they don't get it. "Adding some spice to their lives" does't seem that compelling a goal. Nor do you have an inciting incident. Why now? Why not last year or next year? What happened to makeRead more
In a movie a character should want or need something so bad that it seems like their whole world will end if they don’t get it.
“Adding some spice to their lives” does’t seem that compelling a goal.
Nor do you have an inciting incident. Why now? Why not last year or next year? What happened to make the characters act now?
Now your story may have both those elements but your logline will improve greatly if you add a compelling goal and an inciting incident.
See lessDuring a robbery, a K9 Officer kills the son from a well known crime family. In revenge for killing his only son the father orders the execution of the Officer's entire family. Devastated, the Officer unleashes his arsenal of police dogs to wage a vicious war against the father and his crime syndicate.
Thanks, hoped I helped, btw one of the rules of loglines is, don't use the characters name unless they are famous. If you haven't sent it off yet I would reconsider.
Thanks, hoped I helped,
btw one of the rules of loglines is, don’t use the characters name unless they are famous. If you haven’t sent it off yet I would reconsider.
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