1. Posted: December 6, 2014In:

    “When a daughter witness a murder, the father from the top of the Hells Angels must protect her until the trial.”

    Richiev Singularity

    "When the daughter witness the murder of his mother, a father..." ------ This is confusing, there has to be a better way to say it. Is 'the daughter' his daughter, as a result she witnessed her grandmothers murder? (His mother would be her grandmother) I am trying to decipher who's who.

    “When the daughter witness the murder of his mother, a father…”
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    This is confusing, there has to be a better way to say it.

    Is ‘the daughter’ his daughter, as a result she witnessed her grandmothers murder? (His mother would be her grandmother)

    I am trying to decipher who’s who.

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2014In:

    After having lost her family to a cold killer, a girl plans her smart, twisted revenge

    Richiev Singularity

    Is this story about a young girl planning her revenge? or is it a story about her getting revenge? Just curous

    Is this story about a young girl planning her revenge? or is it a story about her getting revenge?

    Just curous

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  3. Posted: December 6, 2014In:

    After having lost her family to a cold killer, a girl plans her smart, twisted revenge

    Richiev Singularity

    Is this story about a young girl planning her revenge? or is it a story about her getting revenge? Just curous

    Is this story about a young girl planning her revenge? or is it a story about her getting revenge?

    Just curous

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