1. Posted: December 19, 2020In:

    A detective fiction writer becomes convinced her lover’s death wasn’t a suicide and must prove his brilliant wife is a killer before becoming the next victim.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is better because in the original logline I couldn't tell if it was a detective who wrote fiction novels or a fiction writer who wrote detective novels.

    This is better because in the original logline I couldn’t tell if it was a detective who wrote fiction novels or a fiction writer who wrote detective novels.

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  2. Posted: December 21, 2020In:

    When the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth

    Richiev Singularity

    It is always best to write the logline from the perspective of the lead character... When his grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the leader of the Assassination Cartel... (They tell us what his plan is)

    It is always best to write the logline from the perspective of the lead character…

    When his grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the leader of the Assassination Cartel… (They tell us what his plan is)

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  3. Posted: December 19, 2020In:

    The U.S. govt., along with Nasa, devise a plot to relocate people of color to inhabit the moon; against their will!

    Richiev Singularity

    Not an issue, I get everything for Richie, Rich, Hey you, Drav My world of warcraft nickname) and occasionally people just shaking their heads and walking away :)

    Not an issue, I get everything for Richie, Rich, Hey you, Drav My world of warcraft nickname) and occasionally people just shaking their heads and walking away 🙂

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