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EDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.
Another concept: The Telepath is from the American south, when he or she realizes the south might lose the American civil war, he or she plots to assassinate Queen Victoria and frame it on the North, thus inciting England to go to war on behalf of the American south. Now it up to one single hero (WhRead more
Another concept:
The Telepath is from the American south, when he or she realizes the south might lose the American civil war, he or she plots to assassinate Queen Victoria and frame it on the North, thus inciting England to go to war on behalf of the American south.
Now it up to one single hero (Whoever your lead character is) to stop the plot that would change the course of the civil war and ensure that the American slaves would stay enslaved.
See lessEDITED: In Victorian London a ruthless spy battles a fanatic telepath to thwart his plot to kill the Queen and plunge the world into war.
I have been thinking about this concept, there is definite potential. The killing of a ruler has begun wars in the past. Queen Victoria ruled from 1837 to1901 This would be after Napoleon and the French revolution This would be after the war of 1812, after which I doubt America would have any stomacRead more
I have been thinking about this concept, there is definite potential. The killing of a ruler has begun wars in the past.
Queen Victoria ruled from 1837 to1901
This would be after Napoleon and the French revolution
This would be after the war of 1812, after which I doubt America would have any stomach for another war with England.
Also, the American civil war happened while she ruled.
Perhaps Spain, or Russia?
So here is just a suggestion, and take it with a grain of salt.
Samuel Clemens lived from 1835 to 1910, right in the middle of Queen Victoria’s reign. He is also known for his travels to Europe and abroad. From his travels, he wrote the book Innocents abroad.
Since this is a story about a Victorian London mixed with a fantastical element in the form of a villain who has Telepathy. You could add a real-life character to the mix.
When Samuel Clemens arrives in London he discovers the fanatical telepath’s plot to kill Queen Victoria and when no one believes him, He must use his imagination to stop the assassination plot.
Just an idea, it’s just that the most mundane part of your logline is the ‘ruthless spy’ everything else seems interesting. The assassination attempt of Queen Victoria, the Telepathic assassin, the plot to start a war. (Not sure why the assassin wants to start a war, that might need to be explained as well)
Anyway, I like the elements of this story and it has definite potential.
See lessConvinced by prominent comedians that marriage will make him funnier, a struggling comic takes their joke seriously and elopes only to find his bride wants a marriage so peaceful that in order to find the comedy in it, he’ll have to up his game.
I like this concept, How about this? ----- "Convinced that a bad marriage will make him funnier, a struggling comedian's plans are foiled when the woman he marries for laughs becomes his perfect life partner." ----- "Looking for love in all the right places"
I like this concept, How about this?
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“Convinced that a bad marriage will make him funnier, a struggling comedian’s plans are foiled when the woman he marries for laughs becomes his perfect life partner.”
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“Looking for love in all the right places”