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Blue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.
The hardest thing is writing a logline for your own story. You want to add to much or not enough.
The hardest thing is writing a logline for your own story. You want to add to much or not enough.
See lessBlue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.
How about something like this: (Yours will be different to reflect the story you are trying to tell of course) ----- "When he's hired to kill his wife's boss, a mob hit man's must execute the job with out exposing his mob ties to his unsuspecting family and friends, who believe he's a normal, lovingRead more
How about something like this: (Yours will be different to reflect the story you are trying to tell of course)
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“When he’s hired to kill his wife’s boss, a mob hit man’s must execute the job with out exposing his mob ties to his unsuspecting family and friends, who believe he’s a normal, loving, family man.”
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If his family doesn’t know he’s a mobster, then his greatest fear would be they find out.
placing him in a predicament where he could be exposed would greatly enhance the stakes.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessBlue collar forty something finds time in his harried day to be a loving husband, caring father, dependable son, mob enforcer, and a violent sadistic killer all while masking his true identity.
How about something like this: (Yours will be different to reflect the story you are trying to tell of course) ----- "When he's hired to kill his wife's boss, a mob hit man's must execute the job with out exposing his mob ties to his unsuspecting family and friends, who believe he's a normal, lovingRead more
How about something like this: (Yours will be different to reflect the story you are trying to tell of course)
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“When he’s hired to kill his wife’s boss, a mob hit man’s must execute the job with out exposing his mob ties to his unsuspecting family and friends, who believe he’s a normal, loving, family man.”
—–
If his family doesn’t know he’s a mobster, then his greatest fear would be they find out.
placing him in a predicament where he could be exposed would greatly enhance the stakes.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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