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  1. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    A lonely middle aged autistic man's painful journey to spread wings and not slip into a made up fantasy world – after beloved parents violently die in a car accident of his doing.

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    Added an answer on May 26, 2015 at 5:18 pm

    Sounds good, but isn't there a -comma- after "parents" or even a -period- . Otherwise English is a more forgiving language than Dutch. If so, could replacing "he" for "and" be a solution? What do you think?

    Sounds good, but isn’t there a -comma- after “parents” or even a -period- . Otherwise English is a more forgiving language than Dutch. If so, could replacing “he” for “and” be a solution? What do you think?

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    A lonely middle aged autistic man's painful journey to spread wings and not slip into a made up fantasy world – after beloved parents violently die in a car accident of his doing.

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    Added an answer on May 26, 2015 at 4:25 am

    ... I don't really have to do any research if you get what I mean. But yes, I still did quite a bit of research. This is 3/4 autob. I thought it was time to right about real emotions for once. And - although you're not hinting on this with - "magic" I'm not a savant either. I have a big imagination,Read more

    … I don’t really have to do any research if you get what I mean. But yes, I still did quite a bit of research. This is 3/4 autob. I thought it was time to right about real emotions for once. And – although you’re not hinting on this with – “magic” I’m not a savant either. I have a big imagination, but who hasn’t. What I’m trying to learn in this forum is to focus and “order” my ideas. But thanks Lucius, your comments are always appreciated. Hope mine are to.

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  3. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    After an undercover hammerhead shark agent and his white shark crime boss bump their heads against a Japanese wale ship, the hammerhead thinks he?s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to his traumatised boss, who ? after witnessing the whale slaughter ? doesn?t want to kill big fish anymore.

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    Added an answer on May 25, 2015 at 5:16 pm

    Thanks, but you know I stole it from "Analyse This" With the logline about the same thing. Give me the same thing only different. What do you think, could this still be a child movie or is the "Whale killing to heavy". Any people know how to shorten this logline keeping the content.

    Thanks, but you know I stole it from “Analyse This” With the logline about the same thing. Give me the same thing only different.

    What do you think, could this still be a child movie or is the “Whale killing to heavy”. Any people know how to shorten this logline keeping the content.

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