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  1. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    When his bride loses her memory of him a week before the wedding, an unromantic guy's guy must restore it by recreating their courtship?s most romantic moments or face losing the love of his life.

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    Added an answer on May 23, 2015 at 5:25 am

    What sort of amnesia? * Anterograde amnesia * Retrograde amnesia * Post-traumatic amnesia * Dissociative amnesia * Lacunar amnesia Controlling when someone is getting his/her memory back is stuff for movies, it's not reality. You can't predict how long it takes for someone to get his/her memory backRead more

    What sort of amnesia?

    * Anterograde amnesia
    * Retrograde amnesia
    * Post-traumatic amnesia
    * Dissociative amnesia
    * Lacunar amnesia

    Controlling when someone is getting his/her memory back is stuff for movies, it’s not reality. You can’t predict how long it takes for someone to get his/her memory back, even if you help faith a bit..

    But I would say to this guy’s guy: Good luck!!

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2015In: Public

    After a big CEO threatens to convert their inherited community TV station into a home shopping channel. Two brothers must find the worst talent to produce the worst shows in order to make the CEO lose interest and give them back their station to uphold their dying father's wish.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on May 21, 2015 at 8:00 pm

    If the new logline answers the ownership legality problems is for others to answer. But I like the logline, it has a lot of irony now. But I think to make the logline shorter you could lose "dying father" and you also have: to" --- "in order (to)"... If the brothers are "inept" it is only logical thRead more

    If the new logline answers the ownership legality problems is for others to answer. But I like the logline, it has a lot of irony now. But I think to make the logline shorter you could lose “dying father” and you also have: to” — “in order (to)”…

    If the brothers are “inept” it is only logical that they make bad programs. They don’t have to make bad programs on purpose anymore.

    Problem with “only to find enormous success online” is that the sentence isn’t crisp anymore. But there is a lot of irony.

    So now there is now way the CEO will ever sell back his shares?! But – but the CEO also has a new problem, should he still turn the TV station into a chopping channel now it has more success than ever?

    As you said The CEO wants “its current viewing audience” but will he lose that audience turning the station into a chopping channel?

    We want the series to have more episodes, so the CEO decides to turn the station into a chopping channel.. If the brothers can earn more money by making bad TV programs, they can make a shitload of money making bad chopping channel programs the CEO argues.

    TWIST (after 7 episodes?) (Total: 14 episodes?)

    So they start making chopping programs. But this does not work because it’s impossible to make shitier chopping channel program than allready are made, ONLY FUNNIER. Making chopping channel programs becomes a fiasco and the CEO bales out. Because of their prior success the brothers have built up a financial buffer and are able to re-start their normal community TV station. End of seasons 1. But is there any intresting ‘contradicting’ content left for a possible season 2?

    After an aggressive takeover of their independent TV station, two talented brothers must produce the worst shows to temporarily lose ratings and force the greedy CEO to sell back their shares(, only to find enormous success online).

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2015In: Public

    Short Film: After the Sun went out, the earth became a cold, dangerous and dark place and people avoid leaving the house in fear of the temperature, murderers and lack of oxygen. When a young girl, depressed by her parents disappearance, realizes her little sister has left, she must go out and find her before it's too late.

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    Added an answer on May 21, 2015 at 3:17 am

    Precisely "when that started to happen" But in your logline you state "when the Sun went out so then it's much too late. You must rephrase your logline. Your story element are ok. But these people would literaly live in an ICE AGE; the last two Ice ages humanity has servived but this Ice age would bRead more

    Precisely “when that started to happen” But in your logline you state “when the Sun went out so then it’s much too late. You must rephrase your logline.

    Your story element are ok.

    But these people would literaly live in an ICE AGE; the last two Ice ages humanity has servived but this Ice age would be much more severe. Only with superiour technologie humanity could survive. But do we still have this knowledge? If there would be lack of oxigen I don’t know?

    It all lets me think of my favorite science fiction writerJack Vances’ The Dying Earth tales (that in reality would not be illogical) :

    “A dim place, ancient beyond knowledge. Once it was a tall world of cloudy mountains and bright rivers, and the sun was a white blazing ball. Ages of rain and wind have beaten and rounded the granite, and the sun is feeble and red. The continents have sunk and risen. A million cities have lifted towers, have fallen to dust. In the place of the old peoples a few thousand strange souls live. There is evil on Earth, evil distilled by time ? Earth is dying and in its twilight.” The “few thousand strange souls” are “feverishly merry, for infinite night was close at hand, when the red sun should finally flicker and go black”. There is magic, but we learn it is somehow derived from “a strange abstract lore ? termed ‘mathematics’ ? Passive itself and not of sorcery, it elucidates every problem, each phase of existence, all the secrets of time and space. Your spells and runes are built upon its power and codified according to a great underlying mosaic of magic.”

    For inspiration read: http://www.theguardian.com/books/2011/dec/05/fantasy-tales-dying-earth-jack-vance

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