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  1. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    Extraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 7:42 am

    Good point Sloan, translating "World Invasion: Battle Los Angeles" where "A squadron of U.S. Marines becomes the last line of defense against a global invasion." -- into my two cents: "After a global extraterrestrial invasion destroys almost all of humanity,the greenhorn leader of humanities last hoRead more

    Good point Sloan, translating “World Invasion: Battle Los Angeles” where “A squadron of U.S. Marines becomes the last line of defense against a global invasion.” — into my two cents:

    “After a global extraterrestrial invasion destroys almost all of humanity,the greenhorn leader of humanities last hope – a highly specialisted death squadron – must bomb the bloodthirsty aliens into oblivion and revenge his murdered family. while sparing what’s left of humanity. ‘

    … But than a logline that’s a lot better constructed.

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    Extraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 7:11 am

    ... True words, but only when the loglines construction really reflects the 'meant' story. And yes, this movie seems to describe "his "hold out" until he can come up with a magnificent plan to save the human race from 'complete' extinction. So I guess - what I learned here - start with the incitingRead more

    … True words, but only when the loglines construction really reflects the ‘meant’ story.

    And yes, this movie seems to describe “his “hold out” until he can come up with a magnificent plan to save the human race from ‘complete’ extinction. So I guess – what I learned here – start with the inciting incident:

    After an extraterrestrial [described] monsters destroy almost all of humanity, a [flawed protag] does [X] to [monsters] to get his revenge.

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    When a depressed hammerhead shark befriends a therapeutic dolphin, his incompetant shrink – a wite shark – wants to violently stop the healing process.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 6:41 am

    Thanks, good point!! From now it?s an 'X rated animated hammerhead tale!' I hope A "bloody rampage" should do the trick as as the A plot action and adventure - set in motion through the hammerheads identity crisis.

    Thanks, good point!! From now it?s an ‘X rated animated hammerhead tale!’ I hope A “bloody rampage” should do the trick as as the A plot action and adventure – set in motion through the hammerheads identity crisis.

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