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  1. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    When a depressed hammerhead shark befriends a therapeutic dolphin, his incompetant shrink – a wite shark – wants to violently stop the healing process.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 5:08 am

    I was surfing for an ideal photo to accompany the logline and found this: http://www.rightthisminute.com/video/hammerhead-shark-has-dolphin-identity-crisis ... So maybe I must change the logline into: "Based on true events -- When a depressed hammerhead shark befriends a therapeutic dolphin, his incRead more

    I was surfing for an ideal photo to accompany the logline and found this:

    http://www.rightthisminute.com/video/hammerhead-shark-has-dolphin-identity-crisis …

    So maybe I must change the logline into:

    “Based on true events — When a depressed hammerhead shark befriends a therapeutic dolphin, his incompetent shrink ? a white shark ? wants to violently stop the healing process. ”

    And I’m not going to change it into:

    “Based on true events — When a hammerhead shark with an identity crisis thinks he’s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to depressed sea animals, his incapable shrink – a white shark – goes on a frantic rampage to destroy all competition.”

    or:

    “Based on true events — When a hammerhead shark with an identity crisis thinks he’s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to depressed sea animals against the advise of his white shark shrink – bloody hell breaks loose.”

    ..or am I?… and did I just bury the lead… twice?

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2015In: Public

    Extraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 4:17 am

    This is a movie that is made over and over... and OVER again; if you want 'any' impact tell us the out of this world (unique) way the survivalist is going to battle the extraterrestrial monsters ! And - what the construction of your logline suggests - when Earth is destroyed there is 'nothing' leftRead more

    This is a movie that is made over and over… and OVER again; if you want ‘any’ impact tell us the out of this world (unique) way the survivalist is going to battle the extraterrestrial monsters ! And – what the construction of your logline suggests – when Earth is destroyed there is ‘nothing’ left to revenge?

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    When his bride loses her memory of him a week before the wedding, an unromantic guy's guy must restore it by recreating their courtship?s most romantic moments or face losing the love of his life.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on May 23, 2015 at 7:17 pm

    I would say a real solid logline. So now let's say this guy gets lucky and he retrieves the needed memories in time, now I would make it a Comedy: For ones break the protag/antag title rules and: "LOVENESIA" They're to be Married but she Does'nt Know After his bride loses her memory a week before thRead more

    I would say a real solid logline. So now let’s say this guy gets lucky and he retrieves the needed memories in time, now I would make it a Comedy:

    For ones break the protag/antag title rules and:

    “LOVENESIA”

    They’re to be Married

    but she

    Does’nt Know

    After his bride loses her memory a week before their wedding, a guy?s guy must successfully propose again by recreating their courtship?s most romantic moments before the ceremony.

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