Ok, the European/America toy irony is not clear, so I cut it. Probably because Americans don’t now who Saint Nicholas is. But without Saint Nicholas there isn’t an antag anymore…?

Mr. Clause is where he always is, at the North Pole. But now it’s made clear by “two weeks before? he has to be at home now to organize the coming Christmas?

I saw most of these problems but did not know how to solve them. Yes, Santa had an affair. The baby grew up at the mother and when she died she became homeless. Could not put this in the logline because the logline is already too long and it’s not crucial info. I like the homeless girl Idea but probably have to cut it just because of the loglines length.

In your version she teams up with the CEO to bring the ‘soul’ back in the toy company?

You already know my answer on the last question:

By saving Santa’s inner child they save Christmas. Santa without his inner child would not believe in Christmas himself. But because there will be people who will not get it, your shortened version is better.

When Saint Nicholas steals Santa?s inner child a week before Christmas, his irascible daughter teams with the sacked head of Nicholas? soulless toy company and a militant elf to bring back the kidnapped inner kid.?

Is it “teams or “teams up”