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In a futuristic society where the new government forbids humor, a brilliant stand-up comedian and his group of clumsy clowns must overthrow the iron rulers and bring back laughter before the Thought Police humor washes the population.
Humor washes = brainwashes the humor away.
Humor washes = brainwashes the humor away.
See lessA young woman inadvertantly becomes the reluctant host to a corporeol lifeform her father agreed to transport across the galaxy on their cargo ship and discovers that the alien is on the run from enemies of the intergalactic coalition who want to use it's powers to over throw the government. She must use her new found abilities to save herself and everything and everyone she loves.
I like the story. How to shorten this logline keeping all important components I leave to the profesionals. What I do want to say is that the problem with these kind of stories is that the audience can get confused "WHO" the lead character is; the HOST or the SYMBIANT. Because a double lead characteRead more
I like the story. How to shorten this logline keeping all important components I leave to the profesionals.
What I do want to say is that the problem with these kind of stories is that the audience can get confused “WHO” the lead character is; the HOST or the SYMBIANT. Because a double lead character can be very tricky, one of them has to slowly take the lead or they must somehow become one.
Cliche but it works:
Symbian and the host team up to save the galaxy after which the symbiont dies, but not before it gives its knowledge to the host.
Let the host and symbiant interact the wrong way and the audience will have a “The Host” (2013) aha erlebniss while watching “Cosmic” and lose interest.
My question is: “is this host/woman living in a futuristic Earth and is that Earth part of the intergalactic coalition ?”
See lessWhen a suicidal boy discovers his girlfriend can only die if she falls in love, the two embark on a philosophical adventure to seek out the meaning of life.
...in other words: show not tell.
…in other words: show not tell.
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