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  1. Posted: April 25, 2015In: Public

    When in the year 2030 IS takes over the world, the Pope escapes justice by going back in time with a hit list that can prevent all future holy wars.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on April 25, 2015 at 10:54 pm

    Yes, this logline is more to the point. How about this: "When IS conquers the world, a conclave of cardinals send a puppet Pope back in time to assassinate IS future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.? or simply this: When ISIS conquers the world, a puppet Pope must travel back in time toRead more

    Yes, this logline is more to the point. How about this:

    “When IS conquers the world, a conclave of cardinals send a puppet Pope back in time to assassinate IS future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?

    or simply this:

    When ISIS conquers the world, a puppet Pope must travel back in time to assassinate their future leaders and prevent a religious catastrophe.?

    What do you think?

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  2. Posted: April 20, 2015In: Public

    A marked-for-death outlaw rekindles old Dixie Mafia blood feuds after returning to the rogue barrier island of Vengeance on a mission to reclaim what?s his and kill the dirty motherfucker who gunned him down, stole his girl, and built a cocaine empire in the lawless coastal town he once called home.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on April 21, 2015 at 7:22 am

    Ok, you can foget "dirty motherfucker" in you logline.It does not sell.

    Ok, you can foget “dirty motherfucker” in you logline.It does not sell.

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  3. Posted: April 15, 2015In: Public

    When images of a past that is not his own almost get a CIA Agent killed on assignment, he disobeys orders to search for the mysterious woman from his vision, but must evade his own agency who’ve made him a target to keep them from meeting.

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    Added an answer on April 15, 2015 at 10:54 pm

    Just going into the "deep blue" ; until now this sounds to much like Total Recall...of which some parts are turned upside down. My take - After CIA's top agent starts to 'recall' that he and the woman of his dreams where investigating a CIA scandal. his agency targets them. Or going further down theRead more

    Just going into the “deep blue” ; until now this sounds to much like Total Recall…of which some parts are turned upside down.

    My take –

    After CIA’s top agent starts to ‘recall’ that he and the woman of his dreams where investigating a CIA scandal. his agency targets them.

    Or going further down the rabbit hole…

    “Total Recall” leads to “Mr.& Mrs Smith” leads to “The Bourne Identity” ; with the final ‘sum’ pictured in a hopefully realistic “Inception” setting…

    After suffering a concussion at a holiday suvival trip, the CIA’s top agent ‘recalls’ his partnership with a foxy female agent to uncover an inside corruption scandal,. Now a deadly ‘rabbit hole game’ unfolds. — Deeper Blue

    Before being made into a movie a lot of of Hollywood?s best [‘CIA agent’] scripts are thrown into the worlds best logline mixer’; the ‘Deep Blue’ of Hollywood?s major studio?s.

    How a ‘computer error=concussion’ helped an agent beat America’s leading agency.

    http://www.theverge.com/2014/10/24/7056493/how-a-computer-error-helped-deep-blue-beat-humanitys-best-chess-player

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