1. Posted: April 13, 2015In:

    A low-level thief goes back in time to alter his family’s life for the better, but discovers his changes have created a new timeline where his wife is dead. As he attempts to reset the timeline, he’ll find himself hunted by his powerful alternate self who’s determined to hold onto this new future.

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    Ok, good story, but I have seen to many of these logline's/stories. But yes, I liked Looper( and Surrogates which should have been in the virtual reality part). My guess is your faforite actor is Bruce Willis and your faforite movie is Unbreakable....

    Ok, good story, but I have seen to many of these logline’s/stories. But yes, I liked Looper( and Surrogates which should have been in the virtual reality part). My guess is your faforite actor is Bruce Willis and your faforite movie is Unbreakable….

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2015In:

    In the future, much of the population has chosen to live inside a virtual utopia, but when a routine upgrade goes awry and creates an AI hell bent on wiping the system clean of humanity, a plucky young programme must choose between his people or face deletion with his adoptive human family.

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    OK, I get it and I think it's briljant. Yes briljant! I's Tron meetsThe Matrix meets Surrogates meets The City and the Stars novel(s) (hmm yes, Neon Flux and more movies are inspired by The City of the Stars. Why does Hollywood keep stealing from those famous science fiction writers, or do they sellRead more

    OK, I get it and I think it’s briljant. Yes briljant! I’s Tron meetsThe Matrix meets Surrogates meets The City and the Stars novel(s) (hmm yes, Neon Flux and more movies are inspired by The City of the Stars. Why does Hollywood keep stealing from those famous science fiction writers, or do they sell out?)

    There’s only one absolute must: The” plucky young programme” must have the form of a human; a very likable tortured rebel soul and outcast, he’s the virtual embodiment of Neo.

    Check these two links for originality:

    http://www.imdb.com/search/title?count=100&keywords=virtual-
    reality&num_votes=3000,&title_type=feature&

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Simulated_reality_in_fiction

    Good luck!!

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  3. Posted: April 10, 2015In:

    An archaeology student discovers three Angels in a tomb, who were violently made into humans by God. She reluctantly aids them in a search for a scared book to restore them to their natural form, so that they can exact their revenge and stop the “End of Times.”

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    I like your logline but something is still missing. The question now becomes 'why' should she 'reluctantly' aid the angels to stop the apocalypse. Does she hate mankind and/or is she suicidal? So now you have: 'After a suicidal archaeology student discovers three fallen Angels in a tomb, she reluctaRead more

    I like your logline but something is still missing. The question now becomes ‘why’ should she ‘reluctantly’ aid the angels to stop the apocalypse. Does she hate mankind and/or is she suicidal?

    So now you have:

    ‘After a suicidal archaeology student discovers three fallen Angels in a tomb, she reluctantly guides them to a scared book that wil make them archangels (again), so they can bring their wrath upon God and stop the apocalypse.”

    I like the phrase “the end of time” but the” apocalypse” is shorter.

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