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  1. Posted: July 11, 2014In: Public

    KUALA LUMPUR 1940 THE MOROCCO OF SOUTH EAST ASIA WHERE SPIES FROM BRITAIN, AUSTRALIA, JAPAN AND CHINA CONGREGATE AND PLAY DEADLY GAMES. A MALAY PRINCE WHO JUST RETURNED FROM BRITAIN TAKES ON A BORING JOB AS A SENIOR GOVERNMENT CIVIL SERVANT BUT FANCIES HIMSELF A SLEUTH AND IT JUST SO HAPPENED THAT A BRITISH DIPLOMAT WAS FOUND MURDERED IN A BORDELLO.

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    Added an answer on April 9, 2021 at 12:16 am

    Try to write in lowercase letters and focus on shortening your logline by focussing on the basic theme.

    Try to write in lowercase letters and focus on shortening your logline by focussing on the basic theme.

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  2. Posted: April 8, 2021In: Crime

    A young ex-offender wearing a GPS ankle monitor finds himself on the run from the criminal gang he betrayed and must make it home across the city before his 10pm curfew or risk being recalled to prison.

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    Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 11:15 pm

    Your logline is crisp Odie. But now it misses the 'Irony of conflict' element of having to fight on two fronts; fighting (1)the criminals and (2)his curfew.

    Your logline is crisp Odie. But now it misses the ‘Irony of conflict’ element of having to fight on two fronts; fighting (1)the criminals and (2)his curfew.

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  3. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

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    Replied to answer on April 8, 2021 at 6:39 pm

    Very good question Jessie. First I thought MPD (split) is you ARE people, and you see people. Then I read a wiki page that said S=MPD, but people link Story hearing voice and literally seing people. Still confuced. Going to read my Wiki (agai) and yours. What do you think?

    Very good question Jessie. First I thought MPD (split) is you ARE people, and you see people. Then I read a wiki page that said S=MPD, but people link Story hearing voice and literally seing people. Still confuced. Going to read my Wiki (agai) and yours. What do you think?

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