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A filmmaker struggles to hire an aging porn actress to star in his next pornographic sci-fi movie.
Never new that was the real reason Choi Eun-Hee was obducted for the greater glory of North Korea. Has potential!. Although a sortlike comedy came ourmt not to long ago
Never new that was the real reason Choi Eun-Hee was obducted for the greater glory of North Korea. Has potential!. Although a sortlike comedy came ourmt not to long ago
See lessThree characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
Jackpot!! Harmonious perfection. I know I pushed it guys. That's because I think we have something here. Most of my logline ideas are crap. But one in ten has potential. Worth to work out. And by working it out, you have to go deeper into the potential story. Apart from what the standard elements aRead more
Jackpot!! Harmonious perfection. I know I pushed it guys. That’s because I think we have something here. Most of my logline ideas are crap. But one in ten has potential. Worth to work out. And by working it out, you have to go deeper into the potential story. Apart from what the standard elements a good logline should attain, it also must trigger the reader’s imagination AND tell more of the story than you would expect from a short logline. So thanks again, both of you!
See lessThree characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
Yes, I saw it! Has been the inspiration for this logline.I get what you are saying Richiev!! Also leaning to the old logline that is close to Odie and your your less feashy loglines. So my last logline was: Fighting their demons, the tales of a SCHIZOPHRENIC LAPD DETECTIVE, a SERIAL KILLER, and a JURead more
Yes, I saw it! Has been the inspiration for this logline.I get what you are saying Richiev!! Also leaning to the old logline that is close to Odie and your your less feashy loglines.
So my last logline was:
Fighting their demons, the tales of a SCHIZOPHRENIC LAPD DETECTIVE, a SERIAL KILLER, and a JUDGE, INTERTWINE as a REAL ESTATE BROKER convinces them to buy the same Hollywood mansion.
But “REAL ESTATE BROKER convinces them to buy the same Hollywood mansion.” is more like a reveal at3/4 of the story; and I could imagion it belongs to the story, not the logline.
So maybe the logline could be:
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Tales intertwine as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to discover and imprison a serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE
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So what did I do:
(1) Geting rid of ‘how many’ tales, Keeps the suspence and give’s me space to dicover the real story.
(2) put in “discover” instead of the normally more logic “catch”. Hey, aren’t the alter egos trying to “dicover” each other. Discover they’re all part of one “WHOLE”.
(3) Cut “split”. As you said, the trick is to keep feeding the unknown info, bit by bit, to the audience (that’s why I used puzzle-pieces, besides complete pieces make a “WHOLE”), then using “split” is already giving to much away.
What do you two think?
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