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  1. Posted: March 31, 2021In: Thriller

    Three characters, three life stories, integrate as a schizophrenic detective puts together puzzle-pieces in a quest to imprison a split-serial killer posing as Hollywood’s Messiah. — WHOLE

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    Replied to answer on April 1, 2021 at 4:33 am

    Thanks guys, the idea is that the 'detective' and the 'serial killer' are alter ego's of one and the same person, and then there is a third alter ego who must pick sides. Here you literally see 'three guy', who the audience will see as the same guy being split living their lives; the serial killer kRead more

    Thanks guys, the idea is that the ‘detective’ and the ‘serial killer’ are alter ego’s of one and the same person, and then there is a third alter ego who must pick sides. Here you literally see ‘three guy’, who the audience will see as the same guy being split living their lives; the serial killer killing; the detective looking for the killer, and the other guy having his life, having to choose sides as the three stories/alterego’s com to gether. Not as in “Angel Heart”, where we find out at the very end, but more complex. When all three alter ego’s integrate and become one complex person, the detective successfully imprisoned the srial killer, because they both are part of one complete person. Problem is this “WHOLE;” person will still be judged as a serial killer.

    This is the only short way that I could put all of this in one logline.If it is not clear, I must conclude I failed..

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2018In: Crime

    To stop the bloody war between the two Five Points gangs, gangleader Paul Kelly must defeat his rival Monk Eastman in a boxing match, with the winner?s gang taking the disputed territory.

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    Added an answer on November 2, 2018 at 4:31 am

    .... Maybe:"After a corrupt Tammany Hall politician demands that his Election Day head-busters stop their own bloody turf war for the welfare of the community, the Godfather of the Mafia agrees to fight a rival gangleader (as logical not in the same gang) in a boxing match;? the winner taking compleRead more

    …. Maybe:

    “After a corrupt Tammany Hall politician demands that his Election Day head-busters stop their own bloody turf war for the welfare of the community, the Godfather of the Mafia agrees to fight a rival gangleader (as logical not in the same gang) in a boxing match;? the winner taking complete control of Five Points, New York. “

    Hmmm, this makes it look too much like “Gangs of New York 1”

    I guess the writer of the book/makers of the movie “Gangs of New York”? took the 20th century ‘Tammany Hall Hall Election Day head-busters’ facts and put them in the? middle of the 19th century.

    Not sure if there still is a story left. Research can be a B*tch.

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  3. Posted: November 1, 2018In: Crime

    To stop the bloody war between the two Five Points gangs, gangleader Paul Kelly must defeat his rival Monk Eastman in a boxing match, with the winner?s gang taking the disputed territory.

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    Added an answer on November 1, 2018 at 4:22 am

    "GANGS OF NEW YORK 2". After a real story. Still looking for a great hook.

    “GANGS OF NEW YORK 2”. After a real story. Still looking for a great hook.

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