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  1. Posted: March 10, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. “On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.?

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    Added an answer on March 10, 2015 at 9:15 am

    That's exactly what I want to picture. The only problem using the word "harmless" is that it does not hint at the officer and his family being a problem for the the technicians of the death camp.

    That’s exactly what I want to picture. The only problem using the word “harmless” is that it does not hint at the officer and his family being a problem for the the technicians of the death camp.

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  2. Posted: March 10, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. “On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.?

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on March 10, 2015 at 9:06 am

    I had to find a way to keep the logline at 28 words hinting at 'why' the Luftwaffe officer and his family are a danger to the technisions of the death camp, without having to use the phrase "to save their lives". The sarcasm in picturing harmless Arians: (1) Luftwaffe officer and his family saving tRead more

    I had to find a way to keep the logline at 28 words hinting at ‘why’ the Luftwaffe officer and his family are a danger to the technisions of the death camp, without having to use the phrase “to save their lives”.
    The sarcasm in picturing harmless Arians:
    (1) Luftwaffe officer and his family saving their lives by being harmless Arians. Not’ baring witness’ of the genocide in the Dead camp.
    (2) Do harmless Arians exist?!
    (3) I the death camp — Harmless Arians -opposite to- mass Murdering Arians
    (In WW2 the enemy only realy respected Luftwaffe officers. This being a legacy of the WW1- the Red Baron etc.)

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  3. Posted: March 9, 2015In: Public

    A young painter from Togo wanting to study art, but instead his family is sending him to Germany in order to secure the financial survival. But if his illegal stay should be noted there, he must not only giving up on his dreams, but also fearing for the existence of his family, who is dependent on his monthly income.

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    Added an answer on March 10, 2015 at 1:29 am

    "After a young painter from Togo is sent to study arts in Germany (under a false social security number), he must play a cat and mouse game with the schoolboard ( in order) to cover up his illegal stay, finish his study, become famous, and secure the large family's financial survival. " Why not letRead more

    “After a young painter from Togo is sent to study arts in Germany (under a false social security number), he must play a cat and mouse game with the schoolboard ( in order) to cover up his illegal stay, finish his study, become famous, and secure the large family’s financial survival. ”

    Why not let him take over the identity of another foreign exchange student from Togo who looks like him. A student the board already is expecting to come to Germany. But now you have to explain ?how? he takes over his identity and ?what? happens to this other student?!

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