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  1. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

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    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 4:17 am

    Yes DGP, the word must be illegitimate . That's what you get when English is not your native language. "The mother was Palestinian who raised her after a clandestine affair with a Jewish man? Nobody but the parents know her true patrimony?" Yes, that's it! But should this be in the logline?

    Yes DGP, the word must be illegitimate . That’s what you get when English is not your native language. “The mother was Palestinian who raised her after a clandestine affair with a Jewish man? Nobody but the parents know her true patrimony?” Yes, that’s it! But should this be in the logline?

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 4:17 am

    Yes DGP, the word must be illegitimate . That's what you get when English is not your native language. "The mother was Palestinian who raised her after a clandestine affair with a Jewish man? Nobody but the parents know her true patrimony?" Yes, that's it! But should this be in the logline?

    Yes DGP, the word must be illegitimate . That’s what you get when English is not your native language. “The mother was Palestinian who raised her after a clandestine affair with a Jewish man? Nobody but the parents know her true patrimony?” Yes, that’s it! But should this be in the logline?

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  3. Posted: February 26, 2015In: Public

    ?After a car accident leaves him in a coma, a lazy Amish logline writer finds himself trapped in an elevator with Hell?s best producer. He now has six floors to pitch and sell an idea to save his physical body and awake.?

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    Added an answer on February 27, 2015 at 12:48 am

    ... Of course, the Devil (or someone else from Hell) is almost always the antagonist, so the other person must be the protagonist. But an antag who needs a lot of character grows. One of the seven sins is to be lazy. So Lucius, You have just proven that you are an atheist like me; God fearing peopleRead more

    … Of course, the Devil (or someone else from Hell) is almost always the antagonist, so the other person must be the protagonist. But an antag who needs a lot of character grows.

    One of the seven sins is to be lazy. So Lucius, You have just proven that you are an atheist like me; God fearing people who believe in Heaven and Hell DO care. About 90 procent of all Americans see us as infidels.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Demographics_of_atheism

    But if more people think the protagonist should be alive, I gett rid of the first two words in the logline. The only problem now is that an elivator ride to Hel or Heaven does not make sence now. If you break a contract with the devil on earth, you stay on earth, suffering eternal Hell there.

    “What must he do to gain redemption” While you posted this question, I was writing the answer: pitch to gain redemption

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