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?After a car accident leaves him in a coma, a lazy Amish logline writer finds himself trapped in an elevator with Hell?s best producer. He now has six floors to pitch and sell an idea to save his physical body and awake.?
... Of course, the Devil (or someone else from Hell) is almost always the antagonist, so the other person must be the protagonist. But an antag who needs a lot of character grows. One of the seven sins is to be lazy. So Lucius, You have just proven that you are an atheist like me; God fearing peopleRead more
… Of course, the Devil (or someone else from Hell) is almost always the antagonist, so the other person must be the protagonist. But an antag who needs a lot of character grows.
One of the seven sins is to be lazy. So Lucius, You have just proven that you are an atheist like me; God fearing people who believe in Heaven and Hell DO care. About 90 procent of all Americans see us as infidels.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Demographics_of_atheism
But if more people think the protagonist should be alive, I gett rid of the first two words in the logline. The only problem now is that an elivator ride to Hel or Heaven does not make sence now. If you break a contract with the devil on earth, you stay on earth, suffering eternal Hell there.
“What must he do to gain redemption” While you posted this question, I was writing the answer: pitch to gain redemption
See lessA young girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now her mother must protect her child from secretive agencies that want to exploit her power.
I like this idea, but because the daughter, as the protag is made inactive by the mother leading the story, it gets less interested. Make the dauhter autistic. Now her yourney is made harder and the respect for her ging out as a winner bigger. And she wil win because she is super creative as an autiRead more
I like this idea, but because the daughter, as the protag is made inactive by the mother leading the story, it gets less interested. Make the dauhter autistic. Now her yourney is made harder and the respect for her ging out as a winner bigger. And she wil win because she is super creative as an autistic savant. I would use the kliche in this story. “After her mother dies, a young autistic girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now she must protect herself by (being) more creative than the secretive agencies that want to exploit her power. ” Maybe make “… that want to exploit her power…” more active. And yes, now it needs to be about 5 words shorter.
See lessA young girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now her mother must protect her child from secretive agencies that want to exploit her power.
I like this idea, but because the daughter, as the protag is made inactive by the mother leading the story, it gets less interested. Make the dauhter autistic. Now her yourney is made harder and the respect for her ging out as a winner bigger. And she wil win because she is super creative as an autiRead more
I like this idea, but because the daughter, as the protag is made inactive by the mother leading the story, it gets less interested. Make the dauhter autistic. Now her yourney is made harder and the respect for her ging out as a winner bigger. And she wil win because she is super creative as an autistic savant. I would use the kliche in this story. “After her mother dies, a young autistic girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now she must protect herself by (being) more creative than the secretive agencies that want to exploit her power. ” Maybe make “… that want to exploit her power…” more active. And yes, now it needs to be about 5 words shorter.
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