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  1. Posted: February 25, 2015In: Examples

    After they are wrongfully accused of murder, a street gang struggles to get back to their home turf ? as every rival gang in the city pursues them.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2015 at 2:35 am

    This is a very good point Livejosh, Yesterday I was looking for a logline that makes this point, for the director this was the essencial point to shape the movie and give it it's unique feel. I know that I once read such a version but I can not find it annymore. All New York districts have their ownRead more

    This is a very good point Livejosh, Yesterday I was looking for a logline that makes this point, for the director this was the essencial point to shape the movie and give it it’s unique feel. I know that I once read such a version but I can not find it annymore. All New York districts have their own flavor and therefore their own gangs. The Warrior fight their way straight across the city, often running for dear live!! The logline also does not tell that all gangs come from the same city, including The Warriors.

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2015In: Public

    An interracial family adopts a pair of kids with special powers from an orphanage, and sets out to help each of them find their one remaining parent.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2015 at 2:22 am

    OK, do not use ...xing, if you can. Keep the words 'active' if possible. Futher more I like NIRs take because it links all elements together: "After an orphan with a fear of abandonment is made a clairvoyant by a secret government agency, he with the help of his new adopting family must find his parRead more

    OK, do not use …xing, if you can. Keep the words ‘active’ if possible. Futher more I like NIRs take because it links all elements together: “After an orphan with a fear of abandonment is made a clairvoyant by a secret government agency, he with the help of his new adopting family must find his parents whom he senses are alive and in trouble. ” I’m not sure of: ” .. he with…” must that not be “…he(,) with..” ?

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  3. Posted: February 24, 2015In: Public

    An interracial family adopts a pair of kids with special powers from an orphanage, and sets out to help each of them find their one remaining parent.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 26, 2015 at 2:22 am

    OK, do not use ...xing, if you can. Keep the words 'active' if possible. Futher more I like NIRs take because it links all elements together: "After an orphan with a fear of abandonment is made a clairvoyant by a secret government agency, he with the help of his new adopting family must find his parRead more

    OK, do not use …xing, if you can. Keep the words ‘active’ if possible. Futher more I like NIRs take because it links all elements together: “After an orphan with a fear of abandonment is made a clairvoyant by a secret government agency, he with the help of his new adopting family must find his parents whom he senses are alive and in trouble. ” I’m not sure of: ” .. he with…” must that not be “…he(,) with..” ?

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