Yes, I like it Richiev/Livejosh, my only problem is that it does not tell us they are female. That gives my story a hook. Could make the title Killer Babes, but I like Serial Twins better. I don’t know? DPG, this was the first storyline I worked on. I’ts part of Serial Twins Rising. The girls are opducted as one month old babies from their real, loving, family by a serial killer couple who have a a desire to have children. They grow up with them to become serial killers.. But because it’s not in their genes they only kill when they think it’s justified. I also had an completely different storyline that I did not like anymore: “Twins from Hell get seperated after birth. They meet again at an conference (debating?) serial killers – organized by a cop.” (their dad who wants to wipe all competition; the other undrcover serial killer attending the conference and the important cops attending ) – Serial Twins. How they grow up (Serial Twins Rising) will be part now of the movie about them running a detective agency, solving their first murdercase . The follow up movie (comicbook) is the next case. http://roosterhoff.deviantart.com/art/Serial-Twins-305889927

… “decorated” for what ? What he did after he was an assassin? You ‘normally’ don’t visualy decorate a man for unlawfuly killing people. If he kills for his government , the title could be 5 STAR ASSASSIN. I think your logline is a bit to long but I like it more than mine. And must I make it clear how she gets at the peace summit? If not,, telling she is Miss Palestine Isn?t really necessary. What I do not like is “” he must go on one last mission” this is used in sooooo many loglines that I could imagion producers getting tired of this (semi) line. What are your thoughts.