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A young socialite trying to escape her controlling and abusive fiance falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanic.
An Impossible love between a young socialite and a penniless artist on board the Titanic, a ship that is about to sink. (or "... can never sink".)
An Impossible love between a young socialite and a penniless artist on board the Titanic, a ship that is about to sink. (or “… can never sink”.)
See lessA drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
The story is much, much shorter but completelyy confusing now. I would use Graigs version of your logline as a guideline for further revisions: "A rich kid drug addict triggers a siege when he takes a hostage during a break and enter. The diabetic hostage?s health quickly deteriorates as the a selfRead more
The story is much, much shorter but completelyy confusing now.
I would use Graigs version of your logline as a guideline for further revisions:
“A rich kid drug addict triggers a siege when he takes a hostage during a break and enter. The diabetic hostage?s health quickly deteriorates as the a self serving negotiator and the addict suffering withdrawal argue it out.”
Although even in this version I’m not sure who is the protag and who is the entag?
And where is the irony in the story?
See lessA drug addicted rich kid breaks into an unsuspecting college students parents home who is home from college due to a just diagnoses of severe diabetic. The situation takes a turn for the worse as a hot shot negotiator tries to prove himself rather than save the girl, who falls into diabetic shock slowly as the hostage taker battles withdraw symptoms. The ending of this terrible situation is tragic and carries swift punishment, no one will ever be the same.
The story is much, much shorter but completelyy confusing now. I would use Graigs version of your logline as a guideline for further revisions: "A rich kid drug addict triggers a siege when he takes a hostage during a break and enter. The diabetic hostage?s health quickly deteriorates as the a selfRead more
The story is much, much shorter but completelyy confusing now.
I would use Graigs version of your logline as a guideline for further revisions:
“A rich kid drug addict triggers a siege when he takes a hostage during a break and enter. The diabetic hostage?s health quickly deteriorates as the a self serving negotiator and the addict suffering withdrawal argue it out.”
Although even in this version I’m not sure who is the protag and who is the entag?
And where is the irony in the story?
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