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  1. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

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    Added an answer on February 24, 2015 at 5:46 pm

    Changed it into ruthless livejosh1nine, but maybe will look for a better word. New version of logline is active. But can someone help me with the interpunction of this logline. Also thanks again Gilgamesh for your last input. I wonder, Did Leon GROW from ruthless to more compasionate because of theRead more

    Changed it into ruthless livejosh1nine, but maybe will look for a better word. New version of logline is active. But can someone help me with the interpunction of this logline. Also thanks again Gilgamesh for your last input. I wonder, Did Leon GROW from ruthless to more compasionate because of the girl? If so i can use ruthless? otherwise I change it! OK, the title now. The only thing I can come up with is “Unlawful? Why? It does describe the occupation of the protag, but also the fact that is daughter is from an unlawful marriage, and what the Palestinians and the Jews are doing to each other is unlawful as well. But still, some of the best titles tell you what the movie is about. This one does not.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 24, 2015 at 5:46 pm

    Changed it into ruthless livejosh1nine, but maybe will look for a better word. New version of logline is active. But can someone help me with the interpunction of this logline. Also thanks again Gilgamesh for your last input. I wonder, Did Leon GROW from ruthless to more compasionate because of theRead more

    Changed it into ruthless livejosh1nine, but maybe will look for a better word. New version of logline is active. But can someone help me with the interpunction of this logline. Also thanks again Gilgamesh for your last input. I wonder, Did Leon GROW from ruthless to more compasionate because of the girl? If so i can use ruthless? otherwise I change it! OK, the title now. The only thing I can come up with is “Unlawful? Why? It does describe the occupation of the protag, but also the fact that is daughter is from an unlawful marriage, and what the Palestinians and the Jews are doing to each other is unlawful as well. But still, some of the best titles tell you what the movie is about. This one does not.

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.

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    Added an answer on February 24, 2015 at 8:27 am

    ... Oops I mean""there instead of "their".

    … Oops I mean””there instead of “their”.

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