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  1. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 24, 2015 at 2:37 am

    As you already have guessed, the 'love interest 'is between the protag and the antag. Somehow X should have to do with him falling in love with (or loving) his target. A(n) X Jewish hitman. The word 'soft hearted' keeps popping into my mind... ok, what event catalyzes my hero to go into motion? andRead more

    As you already have guessed, the ‘love interest ‘is between the protag and the antag. Somehow X should have to do with him falling in love with (or loving) his target. A(n) X Jewish hitman. The word ‘soft hearted’ keeps popping into my mind… ok, what event catalyzes my hero to go into motion? and take action? So an hitman goes into action just because his boss gives him his target, in this case Miss Palestine. But his credo is no killing of women and children. But he allready killed them anyway? What sort of type was Leon discribed in one word? A troubled soul.. even guilt-ridden. One part of him tells him he has to kill (follow orders) her, the other part says he has to save her….

    An ruthless Jewish assassin must liquidate his unlawfull daughter, Miss Palestine, before she (can) blow(s) herself up ? (,) (while)? advocating global peace at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.?~ Miss Palestine

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 24, 2015 at 2:37 am

    As you already have guessed, the 'love interest 'is between the protag and the antag. Somehow X should have to do with him falling in love with (or loving) his target. A(n) X Jewish hitman. The word 'soft hearted' keeps popping into my mind... ok, what event catalyzes my hero to go into motion? andRead more

    As you already have guessed, the ‘love interest ‘is between the protag and the antag. Somehow X should have to do with him falling in love with (or loving) his target. A(n) X Jewish hitman. The word ‘soft hearted’ keeps popping into my mind… ok, what event catalyzes my hero to go into motion? and take action? So an hitman goes into action just because his boss gives him his target, in this case Miss Palestine. But his credo is no killing of women and children. But he allready killed them anyway? What sort of type was Leon discribed in one word? A troubled soul.. even guilt-ridden. One part of him tells him he has to kill (follow orders) her, the other part says he has to save her….

    An ruthless Jewish assassin must liquidate his unlawfull daughter, Miss Palestine, before she (can) blow(s) herself up ? (,) (while)? advocating global peace at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.?~ Miss Palestine

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2015In: Public

    An honorable Mossad assassin must kill his illegitimate daughter, Miss Palestine, before she blows herself up, while advocating global hate at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.

    Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
    Added an answer on February 23, 2015 at 7:45 am

    Ok how is this?: "A sluggish Jewish hitman must kill Miss Palestine before she can blow herself up while advocating global peace at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit."~ Miss Palestine

    Ok how is this?: “A sluggish Jewish hitman must kill Miss Palestine before she can blow herself up while advocating global peace at an Israeli-Palestinian peace summit.”~ Miss Palestine

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