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Upon being diagnosed with lung cancer, a lifetime litterbug tries to make the world beautiful for his depressed granddaughter before he dies.
He doesn't die THAT quickly and people do litter continuously, so just picking up all the litter once isn't much of a story, so I made it so he keeps cleaning. Also, I don't think it's that important to specify whether or not he's picking up the trash himself, which might be his initial plan but cerRead more
He doesn’t die THAT quickly and people do litter continuously, so just picking up all the litter once isn’t much of a story, so I made it so he keeps cleaning. Also, I don’t think it’s that important to specify whether or not he’s picking up the trash himself, which might be his initial plan but certainly isn’t the result:
“Upon seeing his granddaughter saddened by litter, a terminally-ill litterbug and aims to keep their town litter-free until he dies.”
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Yeah, I wasn't sure about the genre, which is why I mentioned Forrest Gump, which is pretty consistently outlandish and thus funny. I guess you didn't see the additional comments I added, which also suggest it being a black comedy :)
Yeah, I wasn’t sure about the genre, which is why I mentioned Forrest Gump, which is pretty consistently outlandish and thus funny. I guess you didn’t see the additional comments I added, which also suggest it being a black comedy 🙂
See lessWhen a non-verbal young chef learns that her signature dish has been ripped off by a rival, she must win over a new elite clientele with her intuitive understanding of flavour and micro-dosing.
I would dumb down "micro-dosing". Also, the way you phrased it, the new clientele are not being competed for, since the rival might be happy with the old clientele? I'd probably suggest she's "competing for" them if she is. And yeah, what dpg said...there are no stakes. It could be something as straRead more
I would dumb down “micro-dosing”. Also, the way you phrased it, the new clientele are not being competed for, since the rival might be happy with the old clientele? I’d probably suggest she’s “competing for” them if she is. And yeah, what dpg said…there are no stakes. It could be something as straightforward as “or be forced to find a new career”.
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