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When a deadly wave of Coronavirus disables most of the United States and his wife, the workaholic President must retreat to a secluded area and raise his six-year-old son alone while guiding the entire nation. In the process he learns that the former task may be harder than the latter.
It doesn't seem like that type of story though, but I guess you know best. Race isn't really part of the story, so you probably want to consider not portraying the president as yet another white male. Either way, it's not relevant to the logline. :)
It doesn’t seem like that type of story though, but I guess you know best. Race isn’t really part of the story, so you probably want to consider not portraying the president as yet another white male. Either way, it’s not relevant to the logline. 🙂
See lessWhen a deadly wave of Coronavirus disables most of the United States and his wife, the workaholic President must retreat to a secluded area and raise his six-year-old son alone while guiding the entire nation. In the process he learns that the former task may be harder than the latter.
Okay, if you have a need for that, go for it. You probably don't want the president to be a white male though. That would earn you some eye rolls.
Okay, if you have a need for that, go for it. You probably don’t want the president to be a white male though. That would earn you some eye rolls.
See lessWhen a deadly wave of Coronavirus disables most of the United States and his wife, the workaholic President must retreat to a secluded area and raise his six-year-old son alone while guiding the entire nation. In the process he learns that the former task may be harder than the latter.
I don't know about this being the Coronavirus that we're right now dealing with... half the nation thinks they can just ignore it. Plus it's a little confusing that you're referring to a President that actually cares. Also, disabling the United States and his wife...the wording is a little hard to pRead more
I don’t know about this being the Coronavirus that we’re right now dealing with… half the nation thinks they can just ignore it. Plus it’s a little confusing that you’re referring to a President that actually cares. Also, disabling the United States and his wife…the wording is a little hard to parse. I’d consider saying:
When COVID-24 disables both her country and her husband, newly elected President Alexandria Ocasio-Cortez must lead the nation through crisis while raising her six year old son in isolation.
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