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Corporal Brandon Goldstein returns home from Vietnam after a 22 – month deployment, seeking answers why his home and family are gone and nobody recognizes him.
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge
See lessCorporal Brandon Goldstein returns home from Vietnam after a 22 – month deployment, seeking answers why his home and family are gone and nobody recognizes him.
I advise against mentioning character's name in logline, unless they are famous; taking up valuable logline real estate. The premise is pretty cool (as Debbiemoon mentioned), but the execution is a bit off. "A Vietnam war veteran returns home after two years only to discover that his family is missiRead more
I advise against mentioning character’s name in logline, unless they are famous; taking up valuable logline real estate. The premise is pretty cool (as Debbiemoon mentioned), but the execution is a bit off.
“A Vietnam war veteran returns home after two years only to discover that his family is missing, his childhood house is gone, and his closest friends no longer recognize him.”
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I meant "stakes, not "conflict", obviously...
I meant “stakes, not “conflict”, obviously…
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