“Basically the premise is that a Law and order type hero…” Well, one thing is obvious- NONE of us were even CLOSE to knowing what the premise was based on your original logline. That’s a big red flag.

I think the concept is very original- even superheroes should grow old, have families, offsping, and eventually become grandfathers. That’s a terrific hook, in my eyes. The problem, as I see it, is making it a straight drama. Not only are dramas the lowest-selling spec genres out there, it just doesn’t seem to fit with the concept, which screams hilarity and very comical situations. Can a concept where a potential son-in-law is introduced to his gf family, whose father is a CIA spy, be dramatic, with shoot-outs and car chases? Sure, but it destroys the potential comical outcome of such a situation and “Meet The Fockers” would never have realized its full potential. Now take a premise like a scientist getting bitten by a radioactive spider, then begins to turn into a spider- is there much in the way of humor in that set-up? It’s a stretch to say the least.

I like the concept, but I’d reconsideer the genre. It strikes me as an obvious generational tale on the lines of “The INcredibles”, and that’s a pretty good movie to be compared to.