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Expecting a big extortion payoff, an esteemed detective's last case forces him to protect his extortion partners and save his reputation.
The problem there, Richiev, is that there's no protagonist. The audience has to root FOR somebody. Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge
The problem there, Richiev, is that there’s no protagonist. The audience has to root FOR somebody.
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge
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Overly vague and cryptic. The purpose of the logline is to encourage a request for the script so as to read it. This logline says to me "Who cares?" Tell me why and how these things are done, and if I'm hooked, I'll read it. Oh...and do it under thirty words. I have a plane to catch. ;)
Overly vague and cryptic. The purpose of the logline is to encourage a request for the script so as to read it. This logline says to me “Who cares?” Tell me why and how these things are done, and if I’m hooked, I’ll read it.
Oh…and do it under thirty words. I have a plane to catch. 😉
See lessA modern day comedic love story where the immature, yet charming, Oscar Cohen struggles when he must decide between his relationship with his childhood friends, and pursuing the woman of his dreams.
Delete the first thirteen words; unnecessary. Pick an interesting and compelling adjective for your protag, leave out the name (unless he's famous), and increase the stakes and the goal. Choosing between friends and a girl is not a movie concept; it's a Thursday afternoon during HS lunch period.
Delete the first thirteen words; unnecessary. Pick an interesting and compelling adjective for your protag, leave out the name (unless he’s famous), and increase the stakes and the goal. Choosing between friends and a girl is not a movie concept; it’s a Thursday afternoon during HS lunch period.
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