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Expecting a big extortion payoff, an esteemed detective's last case forces him to protect his extortion partners and save his reputation.
Timmyelliot and Kriss channelled my thoughts exactly. Seems like there was a misprint somewhere along the line...
Timmyelliot and Kriss channelled my thoughts exactly. Seems like there was a misprint somewhere along the line…
See lessJack loves three things ? his family, pussy and profanity ? when his son drops the c-bomb at school, his wife gives him an ultimatum, sex or swearing.
Rule No. 1 for any logline: it has to contain perfect spelling and be grammatically correct. Personally, I don't think words like "pussy" and the c-word really fit well with stories involving children, especially 7-yr. olds, so you might experience some real genre issues. I'm not swayed at all on thRead more
Rule No. 1 for any logline: it has to contain perfect spelling and be grammatically correct. Personally, I don’t think words like “pussy” and the c-word really fit well with stories involving children, especially 7-yr. olds, so you might experience some real genre issues. I’m not swayed at all on the “shock” value, since nothing really shocks me anymore.
As a logline, it works okay, but to me, the problem is in the concept itself. I think you show that you CAN write a good logline, and that’s what this is all about, I’d guess…
See lessThe great British icon suffers the slings and arrows of outrageous farce when an illiterate English twit, Will, and a black fry cook, Shakespeare, team up to become the world?s single greatest playwright.
Yes, I did. I just thought the goal (converting beggars to a theatre guild) was a bit weak, and the stakes (being arrested), weaker still, so I threw in something I thought might spike it a bunch. The last logline, from your last post, is perfect for the story plot as it currently stands, IMO. GreatRead more
Yes, I did. I just thought the goal (converting beggars to a theatre guild) was a bit weak, and the stakes (being arrested), weaker still, so I threw in something I thought might spike it a bunch.
The last logline, from your last post, is perfect for the story plot as it currently stands, IMO. Great job!
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