1. Posted: January 10, 2013In:

    With the unwanted help of a little girl in his building, a reclusive retired man with OCD tries to figure out which one of his neighbors keeps dropping cigarette butts onto the patio of his New York city apartment.

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    It's a bit wordy (40 words; target should be between 25-30), but I find the concept to be very compelling and downright funny. I can picture much of it in my head, which is EXACTLY what a good logline should ultimately accomplish. I love it (just excise some of the extraneous). Geno Scala (sharkeatiRead more

    It’s a bit wordy (40 words; target should be between 25-30), but I find the concept to be very compelling and downright funny. I can picture much of it in my head, which is EXACTLY what a good logline should ultimately accomplish. I love it (just excise some of the extraneous).

    Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), Judge

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  2. Posted: January 4, 2013In:

    A modern day comedic love story where the immature, yet charming, Oscar Cohen struggles when he must decide between his relationship with his childhood friends, and pursuing the woman of his dreams.

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    Well, there you go. Another reason- it's been done. Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge.

    Well, there you go. Another reason- it’s been done.

    Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge.

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  3. Posted: January 5, 2013In:

    Jack loves three things ? his family, pussy and profanity ? when his son drops the c-bomb at school, his wife gives him an ultimatum, sex or swearing.

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    Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge

    Geno Scala (sharkeatingman), judge

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