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Cadence, a twenty-something deadbeat, devises a scheme to steal doughnuts from a local bakery, to regain her ex-boyfriend's affection.
No need to mention protag's name, unless famous (nice name...probably goose-steps when she walks, though...) You have to explain why stealing doughnuts will regain his affection; is it just because he likes doughnuts? It's cute, but I can't see it as anything more than a short. Geno Scala (sharkeatiRead more
No need to mention protag’s name, unless famous (nice name…probably goose-steps when she walks, though…)
You have to explain why stealing doughnuts will regain his affection; is it just because he likes doughnuts? It’s cute, but I can’t see it as anything more than a short.
Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge
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Woodssw- the goal; protecting his family…from what? You have room for ten more words before you start running into trouble. I’d use them to let us know the danger (stakes), and either the secret or the reason for the grudge- or both.
Geno Scala- sharkeatingman; judge
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You would definitely win in our Scrabble games...
You would definitely win in our Scrabble games…
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