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Psychological Thriller
Reads more like a short synopsis. Try to reduce it to the heart of the issue- twenty-five words, if possible, no more than thirty. Make sure the tone/genre is clear in that logline. If there is a "hook" (soemthing that separates it from other movies of the same genre) highlight the hook in the logliRead more
Reads more like a short synopsis. Try to reduce it to the heart of the issue- twenty-five words, if possible, no more than thirty.
Make sure the tone/genre is clear in that logline.
If there is a “hook” (soemthing that separates it from other movies of the same genre) highlight the hook in the logline. No time to be coy or secretive. The hook probably lies within the deadly secrets or disturbing relations.
Good luck- Hope it was helpful!
See lessAn Argentinean parish priest struggles with an evil force conjured by the mind of a man and a woman.
I realized that you paid an awful lot of money for Ms. Kram's services, but it seems to me you ended up with the opposite extreme of your first logline. The first one was too short and absent of any real information, and your final product is two-times too long, with extraneous information. There ISRead more
I realized that you paid an awful lot of money for Ms. Kram’s services, but it seems to me you ended up with the opposite extreme of your first logline. The first one was too short and absent of any real information, and your final product is two-times too long, with extraneous information.
There IS a happy median: “An Argentinian priest fights an evil specter and must enlist the help of a Buddhist monk before it kills members of a dysfunctional family from his parish.”
Alas, this is just one man’s opinion…
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Let's start with the sentence structure: You open the sentence with the psychiatrist as the subject, then go on to talk about the stalker patient. It should be "After being seduced by her naive psychiatrist,..." After that, I don't find a "hook" or anything of note that separates this story from theRead more
Let’s start with the sentence structure: You open the sentence with the psychiatrist as the subject, then go on to talk about the stalker patient. It should be “After being seduced by her naive psychiatrist,…”
After that, I don’t find a “hook” or anything of note that separates this story from the hundreds of other patient/doctor stalker stories. You have to “up the ante” for the doctor with some additional conflict- he’s married to the governor’s daughter, or he’s famous for having beat a similar accusation in the past, or his only defense to his innocence is that he’s gay, but so deep in the closet, he’s not willing to come out, etc.
Just some ideas…
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